~~In the shoes of…. “I don’t really know what this feeling” is called~~
The picture belongs to Al Forbes. I generally write poetry on pictures, but this picture just stood out… I couldn’t control my pen and I think I just could feel the words.. My heart goes out to all who feel this way.
I keep standing.. waiting for that one ray of light to feel alright.. for that one unheard whisper that tells me, it’s okay.. you can CRY..and yet the clock keeps ticking.. there’s no sound.. no whispering.. no hugging..It’s just me and my shadow.. and slowly as the sun hides in the tuft of white clouds that I once loved, the shadow too leaves me alone.. It feels screechingly haunted like someone came in and robbed me of me.. Am I really alive or in that one nano second, all the happiness just vanished and disappeared in thin air…
I walk the lonely miles.. I feel I am walking because the legs are moving but the mind seems to have stopped.. the heart doesn’t seems to register.. My eyes are strained.. I don’t know how long it has been since I blinked.. is it really necessary to blink? I see a mirror.. or I think it is a mirror.. there are ripples in it… might as well be a lake.. I don’t know.. my mind has alienated me.. the face that reflects.. It is a version of me.. Devoid and stripped of all the colors and the shades that made me who I was.. There are a pair of eyes but they don’t have any shine.. You can see hell in it.. I look hard and the shape doesn’t change.. no movement.. the face is still.. It might be a painting.. but then I don’t know what painting is.. Is it something that artists draw or is it a memory you lock forever in a canvas to hug close and never to let go…
No one is near.. No voices comfort me today.. far away an owl hoots.. perhaps he is looking for his wife, but who truly is a wife? they leave us too.. the deeper philosophical belief says, we come alone and we go alone and all the time in between is a break.. Is it really so? who thought all of this? How do we know the one who told this isn’t lying? I don’t know.. I will never know.. I just sit or I think I am sitting because my legs are not moving anymore…
I am TIRED.. the eyes are closing or I think they are closing.. I can’t see the clouds.. they seem too far.. The moon is shining high above.. There is a light but I can’t see it fully.. I feel blood, but I don’t really know what blood is.. I don’t know who I am.. I can’t understand what is going here.. I want to hug the eerie shaped moon.. I want to bathe in its light but my eyes can’t see anymore… Something is changing or I feel it is.. I don’t know.. I have never known… I Think I have to go..
I hear some words.. some whispering at last.. DON’T GO… YOU’RE STRONG… I smile or at least I feel, I smile.. if smiling is the movement of lips and fluttering inside the heart, I think I did smile.. I don’t know.. they are just the words I wanted to hear, but IT IS JUST TOO LATE.. The moon calls me.. the moon is my mate.. it heard my voice.. It wants me near.. forever and beyond, I have to go.. for too long, I stayed in a world that was NEVER my own.. Hurt, broken and scared.. IT IS THE TIME TO GO
Lifeless and dead
Alone she stood
Scared of the change
Hiding in a hood
To the moon she looked
The shine she loved
So long it was alone
She wailed and moaned
In the dead of the night
She committed suicide
The moon too cried
And it rained that night
Just a voice
Just one hug
Might have saved
A girl so bright
And yet no one came
It was too late
The moon still shines
But, only in the night
Last two lines….wow!
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thank you Richard.. the picture was just speaking volumes..
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There are some wonderfully crafted lines in here, like especially bright diamonds amongst a chest of jewels. 🙂
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aww thank you so much… it was all the effect of the pictue
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That is a truly wonderful poem Indy. So sad and meaningful. Thank you for using one of my photos
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I am the one to be doing all the THANKING.. the picture spoke volumes and I just fell with the flow… I’ve told you many times before and i will tell again, I absolutely love ur PICTURES
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🙂 Thank you
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🙂 🙂
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Reblogged this on A Mixed Bag and commented:
Shruti used one of my photos for a piece of poetry. If you haven’t visited her blog, go there now. It’s worth it
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Just excellent! Hugs, Barbara
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aww thank you Barbara.. all credits go to the picture.. it is JUST brilliant..
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Reblogged this on idealisticrebel.
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i’m so sorry i just could not let it go…
I could remove if you so desire?
http://tot123itsme.com/2014/02/22/poet-thief-when-youre-at-the-end/
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Are u kidding me???? This is so beautiful.. I’ve no words.. Absolutely nothing.. It is marvelous in ways that can only be felt.. Why would I have a problem with it.. In fact I am honored.. You completed the poem beautifully.. I couldn’t comment there because of my stupid phone.. But I LOVE it loads.. I am going to share it on my Facebook wall 🙂 🙂 this meant a lot.. Thank you so much..
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i did that with hastywords.wordpress.com after she visited thisoldtoad.com. i had never written a poem
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If you have never written a poem before, you should because it is BEAUTIFUL in ways I cannot even begin to express. This was a very heart felt gesture. thank you a million times.
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Poignantly powerful! Beautifully expressed…
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Thanks a lot.. the picture just spoke 🙂
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Stunning, powerful, amazing, sad, and beautiful. This is an incredible piece Shade. I love the idea of the story outlining the poetry to follow. What a concept. I am floored.
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aww thank you so much.. this picture was just so special.. it kept me hooked.. i knew there was something to be sad…
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very well expressed!! commendable
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thanks a lot… 🙂 🙂 the picture did the trick.
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yeah indeed
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🙂 🙂
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It is true that the moon can only shine at night…but one should never forget…it’s always night somewhere. The moon is always shining on someone.
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Brilliant way of thinking Alex…
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This is my first time to visit your blog… (accidentally actually) but i’m so deeply touched by how you put your feelings and thoughts through words… Thanks. May God bless you always.
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Thanks a ton… I am glad to know u like it and I look forward to seeing your blog too 🙂 😉
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